Let’s see… We’ve got inappropriate capitalization, a missing comma, a run-on sentence, quotes instead of an apostrophe, incorrect conjugation, missing closing punctuation… Did I miss anything?
Nice work, L. This was actually a goodbye cake from a job where i used to work. For some reason they originally put, “Good Luck Jeremy, We Missed You,” and as if that wasn’t a fail enough on its own, the lady who picked it up said, “eh… add an apostrophe and two L’s and we’ll call it a deal.”
Let’s see… We’ve got inappropriate capitalization, a missing comma, a run-on sentence, quotes instead of an apostrophe, incorrect conjugation, missing closing punctuation… Did I miss anything?
Um… the lettering is off center so the cake looks lopsided? Wait, that’s an aesthetics fail not an English fail. No, L, I think you’ve got it covered.
But it looks so delicious! I would eat those words.
Nice work, L. This was actually a goodbye cake from a job where i used to work. For some reason they originally put, “Good Luck Jeremy, We Missed You,” and as if that wasn’t a fail enough on its own, the lady who picked it up said, “eh… add an apostrophe and two L’s and we’ll call it a deal.”
Oh and Espian… It was delicious…